Trifextra challenge:
When she laughed I could see tiny wrinkles near the corners of her eyes. Whispers of lines that one day would tell stories to our grandchildren.
She could see through my smiles and mockery and know that the pain was tearing me apart.
Sometimes she would look up from her book and just gaze out the window.
But yeah, it was all about the sex.
Oh, I really liked this! Unexpectedly sweet and affirming.
I’m going for the shock and awwwwww factor by alternating bloodshed with sentiments like this.
I loved the poignancy and clandestine veracity of this piece, and a few other random big words. I loved the ending, the beginning, and the middle also.
Are you high right now?
I was just teasing you LA. It was just a sweeter comment than usual, but thank you. Your opinion means a lot to me.
Hmmm, interesting. I’ll have to look up the meaning of trifextra.
It is just a writing challenge thing. It is fun. You should try it. The word Trifextra in that post is a link to their site.
You dirty, dirty woman. Ok, I’ll play along but we need a safe word. How about….Glugenconcrepenschreimer. All you have to do is say that.
The joke that won WWII
What joke? I totally don’t get it, but if you tell me, I’ll…hmmm, let me think of something. Why is it that everyone else knows stuff before I do?
I couldn’t actually watch the whole video, but how does it apply?
What? You have stepped out of the limits of sanity on this comment. Okay, what is dirty, other than every time I think of what your nickname PG stands for…
What is the safe word for?
Here’s my take (on the whole comment commentary) Nuke said she’d ‘play’. In “dangerous sex” games, couples agree on a safeword. The proposed word is all german and unpronouncable leading to the introduction of the funniest joke in the world sketch.
Well, that makes a lot more sense than either of those boys comments. My take on this whole thing is that Hotspur and Nuke know that I’m not going to understand most movie and music references, and they like to toy with me. That has been happening a lot lately.
Nice!
Thanks. I think the lies we tell ourselves are often the worst ones.
Thank you!
Oh. My. Stars. Y’all are making me giggle. A lot. And then reality settles in as I realize how uncreative I am in comparison………..
Whatever, you are very creative. Didnt you just win not too long ago? You do a very good job.
Good one!
Thank you very much!
Good post. I have no idea how trifextra works but I will try to give it a whirl
It is fun!
Oh! Ha hahahaha … also?
I. Love. It.
Seriously, it makes me think of most (all) of the men I know and how when things get a bit too sensitive, they go to what’s rude and (hopefully) funny. This includes my 5 year old boy who can ruin any yummy moment with a big squish and a yell: BOOBIES!
Sounds Lille my kind, but their outbursts are usually about butts or thins that come out of butts.
How sweetly engaging my friend…
Androgoth XXx
Thanks.
That last line caught me off guard. Well done.
Thanks! I’m glad you liked it.
Thanks for linking up to Trifextra this weekend. I, too, loved this piece. I love the sweetness and simplicity of it. Definitely effective, and a great take on the prompt. Hope to see you back again soon.
Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
And My guess is that the lie is that it’s all about the sex.
You guessed it. Really he was in it for the money.