Alright, I might not have been the first one to go here, because I haven’t actually read very many of the others, but this week’s Trifecta:
What should I do…hmmm…poetry? Okay, I like to keep things short. No pun intended.
Penis Poem
You learn it when you are just a teen
The brain in boys is most often between
Their legs, of course, you know that it’s true.
Without its control, we wouldn’t have you.
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Did you write this before or after the IV?
After, thanks for giving me an excuse. 😉
I’ll be curious to see if anyone else has your take on this particular challenge.
It seems the most logical illustration of brain use as defined in the #3 definition. I did look through the ones after I posted this, and I don’t believe anyone has used it in this way yet. Most seem more technological.
Are you going to enter it?
Nope. I’m pretty sure I couldn’t top yours, and now that I’ve read yours, I’m pretty sure I can’t think of anything else!
Thanks, but you should enter it. Even if you don’t do it this time, you should start. I think you would be really good at it.
Sorry – can’t tell if you’re for or against here…
Great entry tho!
No preference, just telling it like it is.
Well that’s most certainly a different take on the prompt! hehehhe
Staying Connected
I’m not a big fan of coloring within the lines. 😉
See, I was gonna do this- Frank’s little brain having all kinds of control and all that, but since electronic stuff was specifically suggested………… oh, who am I kidding? They only gave us 333 words, and there just wasn’t enough of to explain Frank’s deal and to carry on the story with where I wanted to go next. Sheesh. Darn words! 😡
Yeah, the word count is always tricky for me too, but usually I have a hard time getting it up to 33. I just prefer the short stuff for Trifecta.
Really? The short ones get me because, well, I’ve been told I’m “wordy.” Hey! Maybe that should be my name- Wordy Woman………. 😆
That’s funny. I’m usually wordy, but for some reason I like short Trifectas.
Haha! No, I haven’t read all of them yet, but you seem to be the only one thinking with that brain. OUCH! that was my conscience hitting me and reminding me to tell you it was also very funny 🙂
Thanks…maybe I shouldn’t say this, but it was one of the first things I thought of when I read the definition we were supposed to use. Yeah, I probably shouldn’t have said that. 😉
It wasn’t too long, but just long enough. It was the right size. It fit perfectly.
I imagined it would. 😉
{groan} That’s really stretching it, don’t you think? Leave it to you to take it to the wall….. 😆
I didn’t want to give this piece the shaft. I got the thrust of it, and it was pretty deep.
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Damn, I need a smoke…………… I’m just glad this was the front door and all because, well, you know, she’s genius and all. There’s bound to be a repeat performance or some sort. 😀
I charge a lot more for repeat performances, but it will definitely be worth it. I’ve never had an unsastified customer.
Tickets for repeat performances, eh? Cleary, it’s all about the expertise. I can you savor it, whereas EH seems to be more of a wham bam thank you mam-er. I may be wrong, though. 😀
Back door?
I think the opposite of Hotspur. He likes to talk like it is all fun and games, but I think that he loves completely. There is something about Hotspur that makes people adore him, and although the jokes are definitely part of the equation, his passion and ability to see through BS (usually, not on April Fools Day, but I’ll let that one slide) draws people to him. He’s a little like quick sand.
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Thanks LA. You know I like it deep and hard hitting, with a big finish. I wasn’t sure this time would be as good as some of the others, but the people who have seen it seem to really be enjoying themselves!
Nice.
“nice” that’s what she said…
Hotspur likes to take it all sorts of ways. Give it too. He is really great at that back and forth stuff.
Ha!!!
🙂
I’m at a loss for words because I’m still laughing.
Thanks, but this was supposed to be serious. A coming of age tale, if you will. I guess as long as you are enjoying yourself with it, I’ll let the humor angle slide. 😉
Oh, yes, yes… thank you! 🙂
Seriously, I’m really glad you like it. It is the gift that keeps giving in the comments.
This wasn’t quite schlong enough
😉 I thought it was perfect. Quality is better than quantity. As I mentioned to Hotspur, it still went deep and hard enough to satisfy me.
Hobbles! Naughty…
I just think the climax came too soon
That is understandable. With stuff like this, even when it is over I like to play with it for a while so I can get a really good feel of the piece.
Too good! I’m running out of puns.
I should be…this might be getting out of hand…
You’ve got to be careful. Sometimes a story like this can blow up in your face.
It’s happened before, but at least it’s relatively easy to clean up and move on…
So length doesn’t matter, it’s what you can do with it that counts.
Thanks for taking a firm stance, we get your point.
Sometimes you have to be firm or you won’t be able to get the job done. I think that is really all that matters, being up when the other men are down. Also, remember, guys can do amazing things with their tongues…telling your girl she is pretty and stuff like that. What did you think I meant?
Awesome. This seems like such an obvious way to go with the prompt, but no one (I haven’t finished reading them all) went there. Very cool.
Thanks! It was fun, but the comments were the best part.
Oh god! Yes! I think I’m gonna comment!
That’s what they all say…
I just commented.
Was it as good for you as it was for me?
{confused} Do I need another ciggy? {not that I smoke, but it’s the thought that counts….}
I think we are all good now.
Whew!
No.
That is good because I was getting tired of faking it.
The correct question is “Was it good for you? I don’t give a f***.”
Couldn’t have said it better. Which is weird because usually I can think of comments that top other comments, but yours is the best possible way to wrap up this whole thing.
Glad to have the last word. 😉
Hey LA…I have a proposition for you. I think that we both enjoy trifecta, but not to the OCD level some take it to right? I bet that I could write better Trifecta’s for the next 3 weeks (we can put polls with a link to eachother’s to vote on in our posts) than you could.
The catch is, each entry would have to be about a body part. Any body part, hair, eyes, heart, etc. And we could use any form (poetry, essay, etc) as long as it still used the prompt and was within all the other trifecta rules and the deadline. Just for the weekly challenge. Not the trifextra one.
I understand if you are intimidated at the thought of going head-to-head with me. I also understand if you are busy and don’t want to commit to this…even though you should have time to throw together a few lines at some point during the week. If you are going to whine and cry when you lose, I’d rather skip it too, I have other children to deal with.
Seriously, if you think it’s a stupid idea, just tell me that. I can handle the truth as well as I handled this post and all of the innuendo in the comments. Not to mention the other things I’m good at handling, but let’s stay on topic here.
Thanks for linking up to Trifecta this week. If you haven’t already done it, you might be interested in clicking on the “Meet Your Fellow Trifectans” tab on our site and introducing yourself there. Hope to see you back on Monday for the new prompt.
Wondering if your challenge inside a challenge is going to work out. Keep us, you know, abreast.
Thank you, and I was just reading the meet your editors thing. It sounds like you and your families lead an exciting life. I need to read more of the meet your fellow trifecta people. I have read a few.
As far as the challenge for Hotspur, I don’t know if he will do it. He is kind of a chicken sometimes. He also might start, and you know, pull out before he finishes the job. I’ll keep you updated on any new developments.