This weekend’s Trifextra is to write the beginning of a novel in 33 words.
They couldn’t understand his final words.
“I don’t know how it happened. I didn’t mean to hurt him.”
“Calm down. It will be okay.”
Little did they know, it wasn’t her first time.
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Intriguing! Makes you wonder what wasn’t her first time and how had she hurt him and of course what happened. Great job!
Thank you Tessa. You have to read the imaginary book to know more. 😉
So in other words I have to write my version LOL! 🙂
Good idea, but I still get the royalties right?
Uh no, I don’t share nicely LOL!
Lol, okay, you can still have the first 33 words…$500 each
Aww gee you are so generous 🙂
🙂
He’s dying. He didn’t mean to hurt the other guy and it wasn’t the woman’s first time. This sounds like a menage a trois, gone very badly, but who knows? I would like to read more.
That sounds like a wonderful plot. This story could go several different ways. I want to read more too!
I’m glad your “hooked” so you can write the book.
Lol, I have a few other projects up my sleeves, but I’ll think about it. 😉
I have no idea what just happened, but I am curious to find out what she’s done before.
I don’t think you want to know…
Confusing and intriguing at the same time!
Me, or the post?
Both!
Lol, you and your blog are exceptionally intriguing at the moment too!
Oooo. Creepy! I like it. I love a sinister female character. Particularly one lingering by a deathbed. Thanks for linking up with this. Hope to see you back soon.
Thanks! I thought we could use a few more sinister females. 😉
Always leave ’em wanting more. And you do. Well done.
I’m new on Trifecta and wanted to say how much I like this. New follower and fan.
Christine
Thanks Christine! I’m glad that you liked it, and Trifecta is fun. You’ll like it too.
Definitely a grabber – so many questions here. Looking forward to more.
Thank you Kelly!
Well, now I’m confused. Pronouns hurt my brain. As it’s an imaginary book, I shall invent names for them and carry on 😉
Sounds good to me!
I like the way you can’t tell who did something horrible, but you know someone did.
Thanks
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