Living Gift – Trifextra
Last breath gone, new hope rose
Skin for an accident victim’s nose.
Liver for another chance.
Kidney? Time – for one more dance.
One life gone, many begin.
Powerful gift of a donor’s organ.
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Plays Well With Words
Nice job. 🙂
Love this. Beautiful words. Excellent writing. Thanks for sharing.
Fantastic idea for a response – talk about new beginnings, and not just one. Great job!
Lovely!
Several new beginnings arise from one loss – this was great!
Great post. Thank you so much for sharing. You have an excellent writing style here. It really shows. Have a great day.
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I really liked the way you highlighted the importance of donating our organs ,on death!A great new start for many.Beautifully written too:-)
That really is a new beginning, isn’t it? Great take on the prompt. We’re so glad you’re showing up in our linkz again.
WOW!
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So in a way life goes on even after death! (:
That is true. It can be a new beginning and a great gift!
A poem for organ doners… sorry… donners… because doners would be weird, like you were going to eat those organs… like the Doner party, get it? Good post…bad spelling… on my part…. but not my best part… I am not donating that!
My spelling is worse than even I thought. Is it really doners? Because that sort of freaks me out. Maybe it is Donner party. Curse you. WordPress, for not having a spell checker in these comment boxes!
Wow, what a great take on beginnings! Nice work.
Very cool but kinda gross, and the donor orguin rhyme made me laugh. Bet it would make an awesome rap!!!
Beautiful. So many new beginnings!
How beautiful. My 15 year old cousin passed this past Sept. He was an organ donor. He saved so many lives. I’m thankful to you for writing this.
Great job shining a light on the importance of being an organ donor. Great writing for a great cause.
I have been signed up as an organ donor for as long as I have been eligible. I think this is a very worthwhile cause for reminders!